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    something ive been working on




    feedback greatly apprecited
    Last edited by paul469; 22 April 2011, 14:31.

  • #2
    Thumbs up from this messer anyway. Nicely put together, and informative. Fair play.
    Aut viam inveniam aut faciam.

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    • #3
      Very good mate! Thumbs up here too!

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      • #4
        Excellent
        I went into an Italian restaurant and ordered dessert and they gave me tiramisu and a blindfolded horse and I said No, I said mask a pony (mascarpone)

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        • #5
          Originally posted by paul469 View Post
          feedback greatly apprecited
          Very professional, excellent work. Sound need work in place as some speakers can barely be heard or are cut off by other sound.

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          • #6
            Well done Paul. Must have taken some editing to ensure there were no F**ks C**nts or Bo**ixes.

            Some Captions for the Interviewees would have been handy too.
            Friends Come and Go, but Enemies accumulate!!

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            • #7
              Who is the target audience? If it is for Joe public perhaps some explanation of what the various acronyms mean, PDF etc

              The audio is a bit low on some of the interviews I felt the interviewees at 3 minutes odd really said the same thing over and over
              You're even dumber than I tell people

              You might have been infected but you never were a bore

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              • #8
                Jaysus, lots of familiar faces there!

                Good video.

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                • #9
                  Sound is very poor quality apart from that good.

                  Whats the aim?

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                  • #10
                    Again issues with the sound, the sergeant is too repetitive.It needs to be scripted as opposed to adl libed in places.

                    The Cmdts version of the lines of defence is wrong.

                    I do like the captain, he has a good grip on the history of the thing.

                    The people in the field looked the part. Shots of the Bks maybe shouldn't have showed so many non army things as the amount of civilian cars.

                    Unfortunately a lot of the stated objectives are now far from reality..too much emphasis on overseas, given its never become a reality.

                    A little re edit and maybe a female imput would balance it out.

                    It hasn't been done in this format before thus making it unique and even enjoyable at times. The target audience would possibly be impressed, some others who know the workings of the RDF might be more sceptical.


                    One big anoying point...and its not aimed at this video....would some one please tell them its noth the sixty fifth infantry battalion...its six.. five inafntry battalion.
                    Covid 19 is not over ....it's still very real..Hand Hygiene, Social Distancing and Masks.. keep safe

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by hptmurphy View Post
                      One big anoying point...and its not aimed at this video....would some one please tell them its noth the sixty fifth infantry battalion...its six.. five inafntry battalion.
                      Really? i've only been in the RDF since around the end of february/start of march so i don't know an awful lot but i've been calling it the sixty second artillery. so should i have been saying six two artillery?

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                      • #12
                        Yep...we don't have another 61 artillery Rgts.The six was the Brigade identifier, the second number the unit identifier.

                        Thats how it was intended in the reserve.

                        In stead of putting using under the army brigade numbering system they created anew Reserve numbering system and cocked the whole thing up.

                        Tecnichally the eastern brigade had its own number..second eastern brigade you should have been the 2nd reserve artillery of the 2nd Brigade ...but some one decided to give the RDF brigades their own brigade structure and further remove them from the normal running of the army..which would in effect made you two two Artillery

                        Any way its ****ed now and no one will change it
                        Covid 19 is not over ....it's still very real..Hand Hygiene, Social Distancing and Masks.. keep safe

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                        • #13
                          Good video alright, will impress the target audience suitably
                          I knew a simple soldier boy.....
                          Who grinned at life in empty joy,
                          Slept soundly through the lonesome dark,
                          And whistled early with the lark.

                          In winter trenches, cowed and glum,
                          With crumps and lice and lack of rum,
                          He put a bullet through his brain.
                          And no one spoke of him again.

                          You smug-faced crowds with kindling eye
                          Who cheer when soldier lads march by,
                          Sneak home and pray you'll never know
                          The hell where youth and laughter go.

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                          • #14
                            ah right never knew that. thanks for the clear up mate

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                            • #15
                              na sixty fifth sounds more catchy , besides we've been saying it since 2005
                              :confused: ONCE YOU HAVE THEM BY THE BALLS , THEN YOU CAN WIN THEIR HEARTS AND MINDS ! :

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